First of all I just want to give you a quick update on my new story. I've finished the first draft, and re-read it all and now I've printed it out (on 53 sheets of A4 paper!) to start fine tuning it. I didn't get time to look at it yesterday and I am very much aware that I need to keep the momentum going otherwise there is a serious risk of disinterest setting in.
Also, I am very self-critical about creating things and if I dwell on it too much I know I will start picking it to pieces and want to change things and then before you know it I will convince myself it's absolute garbage - which I know it isn't, and I don't want that to happen. I think it's probably better to keep the rewriting to a minimum and to post it and move on.
I re-read what I think is my 'best' story yesterday ('Girls Talk'), this is the one that has the most requests for more chapters and, like many of my stories, it deserves at least one more. I do have a tendency to write 'first chapters' rather than stories that are complete in themselves, which is a bit annoying honestly, as even I can see that most stories I write feel incomplete.
But I did notice a couple of small details that bugged me in that story, as I had duplicated them in my new story - I mean I seriously doubt anyone else would have noticed, but I still want to change them. Please don't laugh but one of them is that I gave a character in my new story the same car as one in that story... I mean who the fuck would worry about shit like that but me? FFS. 🤣
As my interest in writing has come back, so has my interest in reading stories by other authors, and I am still working on adding stories to my 'Stories by Other Authors' page. I want to do it nicely though and give each one a banner to click on rather than just a list of links. Currently you can access this page from the link at the bottom of the 'Stories' page (under the links to my stories), but when it is a bit more substantial in content I will put a link somewhere more convenient.
Last night I read a great story, which will definitely be getting a link, called 'Her Enthusiasm Made Me A Cuckold'. I just picked a story at random from the 'Loving Wives' section of Literotica and got lucky. The story starts out as a kind of 'wife watching' story and escalates from there. It was only posted a couple of days ago and apparently 'part two' is in the works. I thought it was really good and my cock was rock hard by the end of it (can't give a higher recommendation than that!).
Speaking of which, as I type this, Mistress and I have just got out of bed after a lovely bit of afternoon playtime. Mistress had a lovely orgasm on my tongue, and it was super easy to make her cum today. I mean I would have loved it to go an a bit longer honestly, she tasted so amazing I just wanted to lick her pussy all afternoon but that's just me all over. Always want to be putting stuff in my mouth. 🤣
The last couple of times I've used the Oxballs Cocksling and it's felt great. I don't know what happens with these things, but I haven't used it for ages because the last time I used it (in a Femdom Session, so not recently) it was very uncomfortable and honestly it felt like it was hindering rather than helping. Which I found kind of strange because over the years it's been very good and very reliable.
So I decided to try it again and it felt great, really easy to get on, comfortable and very effective at keeping my balls tight and my cock hard. Mistress teased, stroked and sucked me beautifully before making my day by having me worship her gorgeous ass. I wanted her ass so bad, and today I was definitely going to ask for it, but in the end she decided she wanted me to do it - which is obviously so much hotter.
Mistress sucked and stroked my cock as I worshipped her delicious asshole and I gotta tell ya my cock felt huge and rock hard throughout. After the heavenly ass-worship Mistress continued stroking me and since I hadn't had to ask to worship her ass I decided to chance my arm and ask her to remove her bra so I could see her gorgeous breasts. The strap on the side nearest me had fallen down her shoulder anyway, so I mean...
Mistress looked at me and thought for a second, said 'Not today' and replaced her bra strap.
I mean, was I disappointed - yes, obviously. But considering I just got to worship her divine ass, I couldn't be that upset about it... and secretly I kind of like when she tells me no anyway. That's kinda what got me in this whole mess isn't it - hahaha.
Misress stroked me to the edge and then stopped and we lay in each others arms feeling very close and happy. But my cock just wasn't getting the message and it continued to throb, until I asked Mistress to please touch it some more.
This is where the Oxballs really comes into its own, being able to be teased so lightly but still keeping me rock hard. It felt absolutely incredible and I could have laid there all day with my cock being gently stroked and scratched. But at the same time it also felt great when Mistress slapped my tight balls and cock... she really is amazing.
Nicely done. :)
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