Saturday, 11 July 2026

Now What? (Written July 2026)

Bit of an oddball this one. I ended up posting it on Literotica in the 'Taboo/Incest' section because I didn't know where else to put it. Not too sure that's really where it belongs, perhaps 'Erotic Couplings' might have been better. Feels more like 'Erotic Comedy' to me, but they don't have a section for that.

Rest assured, more Femdom / Chastity stories are coming very soon! 
 

Lucky Lee my friends call me, and not without reason. Y’see I’m getting married soon, to the most beautiful girl I (or any of my friends) have ever seen. There’s no denying it, Angel (I know, I know, could it get any worse?) is absolutely drop dead gorgeous. Stunning. Her hair is ice blond, her features are impeccable, her tits are just right for her slender frame… honestly I can’t fault her. And yet…

Despite all this, I find myself attracted to her sister. Yes, I know super cliché right? But hear me out, y’see… the thing is Angel is beautiful, and almost every man I know would crawl over broken glass to see her take a bath, but she’s just not all that in bed.

Don’t get me wrong, she ‘likes’ sex, she ‘enjoys’ it, but she has zero curiosity. Part of the problem seems to be that she cums too easily. I know, right.., what a pain. And yeah, the first time we fucked and she came after like three minutes I was feeling pretty chuffed with myself… but then she explained that she always cums quick. I mean it’s not a bad thing…

But the thing is, once she gets off, she kinda loses interest. I don’t mean she tells me to stop, she lets me finish… but the passion goes and she looks a little bored. And if I try and initiate anything a little ‘extra’ then it gets shut down real quick. I mean she gives me blowjobs now and again, and occasionally she lets me fuck her from behind, but mostly it’s missionary, with the lights off.

Okay, that’s not true… usually the lights are on. 

Usually.

So yeah, like I say… I probably shouldn’t have rushed into marriage and all that, but it’s a bit late now. The church is booked, rings are bought, invites are sent out and I’m fully integrated into her extended family. They fucking love me, bless them! And I love them too, but when we meet up I’m always hoping I get talking to Carli.

Admittedly Carli isn’t as drop dead gorgeous as her older sister, but she’s still great looking. Oddly she’s the complete opposite of Angel in every way and I sometimes wonder if they share the same father. I mean, her Mum (Tina) is lovely and she doesn’t strike me as the cheating type, but who knows? I can see Geoff in Angel, but not so much in Carli…

Carli’s very different in personality too, where Angel is the sweetest girl you’d ever meet and is kind and lovely to everyone, Carli has a bitchy streak to her. Sounds like just the sort of person you’d want to get involved with right? 

Yeah, I see that now… but she’s also funny, engaging and very, very sexy. 

So it was Tina’s 55th birthday and we were all round her house for a party. Naturally Carli was there too but I didn’t catch up with her until later in the evening. It was late October and a bit nippy outside so the party was mainly indoors, but it didn’t really matter because Geoff and Tina’s house is fucking HUGE.

Angel was off in another room talking to her mum’s cousin or something when I bumped into Carli getting herself another drink.

“Hi, how ya doing?” she asked. “Not too bored I hope?”

I flashed her a grin.

“Not at all, it’s been a fun evening so far.” 

She gave me a pitying look.

“Oh Lee… this is me you’re talking to.”

“Oh yeah, I forgot… you’re way too cool for all this aren’t you? Family parties…”

 She looked at me through half closed eyes and gently shook her head.

“At least I have wine,” she said witheringly.

As she sipped her wine I looked at her like a thirsty builder looks at a cold pint on a hot day. While she didn’t look much like Angel their bodies were similar, and yet somehow Carli’s looked more enticing; her short black dress clung to her like a second skin. 

“Nice dress,” I noted, tipping my head in approval.

She looked down at it as if she had forgotten what she was wearing.

“Oh, thanks… I guess. Do you always go around complimenting strange women?”

This kind of banter was not unusual between us, Carli and I weren’t ‘friends’ exactly, but we seemed to be on each other’s wavelength and somehow she knew that Angel wasn’t necessarily the right girl for me.

“Especially since you’re getting married soon…”

She couldn’t fail to notice the tiny grimace I made at the mention of the ‘M’ word and lowered her voice a touch. Suddenly we were the only ones left in the kitchen and everything seemed a little ‘off’.

“So how are things with you and my ‘lovely’ sister?”

“Good…” I said, unconvincingly.

“You don’t sound very sure.”

“Don’t I?”

“Not really, no. Are you having doubts?”

I tried to focus on formulating an acceptable answer, but my attention was hijacked by the incredibly sexy woman in front of me. Her dress really was incredible and her shoes, fucking hell, the sluttiest black sandals I’d ever seen with her pretty red painted toenails peeping out of them. Jesus! 

“It’s great, “ I finally sighed, unconvincingly.

“It’s okay,” she said, moving a little closer. “You can tell me.”

I looked at her sipping her wine, her bright red lipstick smearing onto the glass while I pictured it smeared across the head of my cock.

“I really can’t,” I said.

“You never know,” she said. “Maybe I can help?”

‘You could help all right,’ I mused silently.

She pressed further, until I finally caved and explained what was wrong. 

“Angel’s great, but the sex is a little…”

“Dull?” prompted Carli.

“Well, I wouldn’t say that…”

“Wouldn’t you?”

“No, I mean… it’s just… it’s just a bit… vanilla.”

Carli looked at me with a glint in her eye.

“Oooh, yeah… Angel is vanilla, very, very vanilla. I thought this might come up because you seem a bit more switched on than most of her previous blokes.”

A heavy pause fell between us.

“In fact you seem much more like the kind of guy I would date.”

Oh fuck. This was not good.

“Angel is beautiful, she’s total arm candy… but the problem with candy is that after a while it gets a bit sickly and you find yourself craving something savoury. Isn’t that right?”

Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck!

“Are you craving something ‘savoury’ Lee?”

I stared into her dark eyes, my cock becoming tightly confined in my shorts and beginning to need an urgent adjustment.

“Yes Carli. I am…”

FUCK!

She looked towards the door of the kitchen then grabbed my hand and led me out through the back door into the garden. She pulled me along as we followed the fence down the long garden path past the shed and the upturned wheelbarrow and on towards the orchard. Once there she stopped and pushed me against one of the trees and kissed me hard, her hands already pulling at my jeans and trying to free my throbbing meat.

Our mouths were meshed together hard, both of us groaning as her fingers closed around and started to pump my cock.

“Yeah,” she said. “You like that?” 

“Uh huh,” I replied.

“Angel doesn’t do it like this does she?”

“No…” I finally admitted. “I need someone like you.”

“Let’s see,” she said as she crouched down in front of me and took my cock balls deep in one motion.

“Jesus Fucking Christ,” I hissed.

Carli groaned into my groin as she sucked my pulsating rod, her fingers pulling my jeans down further to give her more access to my balls. At first she was gentle, but as she continued to suck me she got rougher and rougher, pulling on and squeezing my balls until I was wincing.

I felt the cool air encircle my cock as she pulled it out of her mouth.

“If you want a girl like me, you’ve got to let me do what I want,” she said firmly.

“Okay, just… don’t stop.”

Carli’s hand gently stroked along the length of my cock, it was so fucking hard I could scarcely believe it.

“You want to fuck me so bad don’t you?” Carli asked breathlessly.

“Yes.”

“I think you’d do just about anything to fuck me wouldn’t you?”

“Yes… anything. Please…”

“What about if I let you fuck me in the ass?”

“Oh, God… yes.”

Carli’s head slammed forward and she swallowed my cock again, her fingers roughly squeezing and pulling on my balls until I was writhing in a mixture of pleasure and pain.

“I’m coming,” I hissed a little louder than I really meant to.

Carli continued to suck, squeeze and pull me until I started to tense up, my balls contracting madly as I fired their contents into my future wife’s sister’s mouth. 

Carli didn’t miss a beat and kept sucking until she was sure I was bone dry. Finally she lifted herself back up to her feet and went to kiss me. At the last second I realised she still had my cum in her mouth and I turned my head away.

She took a step back and gave me an angry look, then spat the contents of her mouth all down the front of my shirt, before strutting back up the garden towards the house. I heard the back door open and close and I stared down at the mess on my shirt. How the hell was I going to explain this?

I quickly pulled up my jeans  and suddenly I felt rather cold. But then I started to panic. What if there were people in the kitchen now. If Carli came in the back door and then I followed a minute later that was going to look as shady as fuck.

I crept up the garden, trying to keep near the fence where it was darkest, until I got to the patio. I looked in the kitchen window and breathed a sigh of relief. It was completely empty. 

Result! I could grab a beer and ‘accidentally’ spill it down my shirt, that should wash away the evidence… 

I moved quickly towards the back door and grabbed the handle. Oh fuck no, it was locked…

I felt my phone vibrate in my pocket and pulled it out, it was a text from Angel.

“Where are you? I’ve looked everywhere.” 

FUCK.

Now what?

Another Day, Another Idea

The title says it all really... I woke up a short time ago and naturally it wasn't long before I started thinking about Mistress's gorgeous feet. I barely seem to think about anything else lately, and seeing that Mistress had her pedicure yesterday (which basically means I can't touch them the whole evening - because I might fuck up her nail varnish) that only brings them to the forefront of my mind. Yeah, I mean it's not like they weren't anyway, but it just adds to the 'pressure'.... 

It's almost like another form of tease and denial isn't it? Look at my pretty, perfect, freshly pedicured toes... BUT DON'T TOUCH THEM! 🤣

Anyway... so as I was lying there this morning, resisting the temptation to stroke my morning wood, I had an idea for another story (and perhaps a tease at the same time!). I'm guessing this was partly borne out of my desire to get more 'foot' stuff into 'How to Break Your Man', which in itself is no bad thing, I see a lot of foot fetish writing in my future (write what you know, eh?), but regardless, I quickly sketched out the idea and I'm looking forward to fleshing that one out.

It's quite a simple story, there's not much scope for further chapters or anything... but I think a lot of you readers out there will understand and empathise, I know I can.

Funnily enough a few minutes ago someone called Mac left this comment on an older post.

Robert, your Mistress has the most gorgeous breasts. I look at them everyday (haha) yet you barely mention them. I get that she has pretty feet too, but man. I would be sucking those sexy nipples as often as possible!
Mac

Hi Mac, thanks for visiting and leaving a comment, it's always appreciated. Yes I agree, Mistress absolutely does have spectacular breasts and her nipples are sexy as hell! But a lot of times Mistress keeps her breasts covered up in bed (I know, it should be a crime against humanity, I demand my day in court!) on purpose (maybe) so that I have to beg to be allowed to see them. 

I have to say that since she started doing that her breasts have become even more alluring than they were before (and I loved them even then!) so please don't think I am ambivalent about Mistress's breasts because that is simply not true.

That said, they don't send me into a submissive daze like her beautiful feet do. And of course she can tease me with her feet all day. It's funny you'd think overexposure to them would dilute the effect, but if anything it makes it worse. Day after day of having her feet in my lap, touching them, rubbing them, kissing them (if Mistress allows)...  

It's the one thing I like about summer, honestly. Come September when Mistress starts wearing socks around the house again I shall definitely feel the slump. I'm sure I'll still get to rub her feet in the evenings, but it's not the same if I can't see those beautiful toes and feel that silky soft instep. 

Just thinking about that makes me feel a little light headed, what the fuck is wrong with me? 🤣

I better go and do the shopping now before I get carried away or slip into a footfetish-coma!

Friday, 10 July 2026

Let's Call it Tease and Denial...

If you haven't already twigged, I really hate this weather, and it keeps on finding ways to piss me off! For example, last night I returned home to find Mistress in the lounge wearing nothing but a vest top and some sexy panties... helloooo I thought as I put my work bag down. 

But sadly Mistress wasn't 'dressed' (or undressed) like that for my benefit, it's because it was 30+ degrees and she was trying to keep cool! And while my overriding urge was to fall on my knees and worship her gorgeous feet, legs and pussy... I'm old enough and wise enough to know that any such displays of exuberance would be firmly rebuffed. Which would be super awkward.

It's just too hot. I get it. And while I'm not knocking that Mistress was wandering around half naked (something I absolutely applaud in normal circumstances), right then it just felt a little depressing. Like winding yourself up to start a diet and then winning a year's supply of Hotel Chocolat.

I suppose we could reframe it and call it 'tease and denial', but that really would be sugarcoating the situation. I just want it to cool down so I can make Mistress cum again. That's all.

Anyway, I completed another story yesterday. Which is crazy... I mean the story was 90% done so it really didn't take much to finalize it. Quite why I left it unfinished that close to being done is a mystery to me, no doubt I got distracted with another idea or something.

I was going to do some more work last night, but around midnight it got so hot and stuffy that I could barely think, let alone write. But I did do something useful, I made a long list of male and female names to use for future writing.

I always struggle with that and then end up changing the names later and making things more difficult for myself. For instance, when I started writing 'How to Break Your Man' the main chatcter was called Kelly, which became Holly and ended up being Amy. In future I hope to consult this list of names (with check boxes!) to pick names that I haven't used already before I start petting pen to paper. Or finger to key. I'm old school, but I'm not that antiquated!

Its funny, I keep saying how uncomfortable having Mistress read 'HTBYM' will be for me, but in the process of compiling my list of names I flicked through all my old stories to see which names had already been used and I noticed some stuff in some of the older ones that was pretty bad (pissing, forced bi, etc)...

But this is different, I think, because it's not just like 'more extreme' it's the way the relationship changes and the language used. I honestly think it's more 'awkward' for me than any amount of fisting would be  (so to speak) because there are elements of this story that reflect me and Mistress, so it's more relatable I guess and feels more 'real'. I don't know. 

I think when I write stuff that's a little more cliched 'Domme / slave' (like some of those older stories; Owned, Everything Has a Price for example) I worry about it less than when I write stuff like this, but then I think this kind of story is more 'affecting' because it's more 'real'. I'm just glad I didn't start writing this in the first person because that would have been really challenging!

Anyway, by 1:30 it was just too hot and I started to feel a bit ill, so I decided to go to bed as it was actually cooler upstairs than it was downstairs. And then I couldn't get to sleep for another hour! 

FFS

So yes, the list of names was a job well done, but I had hoped to work on the CBT story that I'm really excited about, but that didn't happen and now I have another idea which might take priority...

And also...

I reread part two of 'HTBYM' this morning and realised there's a huge chunk of it that I'm not happy with. This is where Amy watches the second video, and although the video is only about three minutes long because there's so much packed into it the description goes on for two pages, which is really boring by the end. 

I've got two solutions here, either I hack bits out to make it shorter or I cut it completely and change it so that Amy watches a different video. I'm actually heavily leaning in that direction, not least because the alternative video is very 'foot worship' and 'ruined orgasm' based (which of course I really like), but of course that does mean a good 30-45m writing is needed before Mistress can check the rest of it.

And it might potentially have ramifications throughout the rest of the story (say if I reference something in the video that's already there). Hmm.

I will give that some serious thought before I do anything rash. But I'm pretty sure I'm gonna change it and maybe add some more 'foot worship' and 'ruined orgasms' to the story somewhere (cos you can never have enough in my opinion!).

I wonder what skimpy clothing Mistress will be taunting me with tonight? I know she's having her pedicure today so her feet will look even sexier than usual... and they looked pretty fucking sexy last night (to this foot obsessed sub-slut).  🤣

Thursday, 9 July 2026

H.T.B.Y.M. is Finished!

Much to my surprise, I have now finished all five chapters of 'How to Break Your Man'. And I don't mean I've finished the first draft, I mean they are completely finished and ready for checking. On top of that I've printed another story that I was working on before I started on 'HTBYM' and that one is also in the proofreading pile and on top of that I've just finished another two stories as well (although I haven't printed them out yet), so lots of stories are on their way!

I've also just read another story that's in my 'Priority' folder and I really love that one, but it needs a bit of work yet so that one will be a little longer. If you like CBT then you should like that one, I think it's gonna be pretty fucking hot! 

It's funny, as I re-read chapters 2, 3, 4 and 5 there are some parts that I know Mistress will read and recognise as being somewhat autobiographical (most obviously the parts about feet/sandals etc) and there are some other parts that will definitely raise an eyebrow or two. But there's no use pretending that this stuff doesn't turn me on, because I only write stories I like to read. 

Yes it will be awkward knowing that Mistress is reading it but maybe she will take something from it and apply it to our relationship (obviously not the cuckolding!), even if it's only that being really 'mean' is HOT HOT HOT! 🤣  

As I mentioned, there is a further element of cross dressing involved, which is not something that interests me (or Mistress, as she stated the other day) and I suppose I could have left it out (actually yeah, I definitely could have, thinking about it now), but the story is based on a real video (actually three real videos which are fairly faithfully described in the story) and so I decided to leave it in and work around it. I actually think it worked out pretty well as it's kind of used as a 'punishment' or at least a 'humiliation' tool, rather than it being a 'sissy' story (this will make more sense when I post the stories of course). 

Right now, having read all five parts back to back, I feel really happy with what I've produced and while I'm not necessarily going to claim it's the 'best thing I've ever written' I do think it's up there. And I particularly enjoyed reading back Amy and Martina's breakfast scene, which is straight up comedy. I just hope people don't find it a bit out of place (I don't) but they can always skip through it if they want to.

I dunno, I thought that added some depth to Amy, as we see her more as a real person, laughing with her colleague and a friend at a different table... rather than just being a one dimensional 'cuckoldress'. I hope you guys will agree when you read it too.

I'm not sure now whether to call it a day on the writing now or keep pushing on while I'm on a roll. The last two days have been pretty relentless, I must have spent 12-15 hours writing this story... but like I said yesterday, with the weather the way it is it wasn't like I was going to be outside digging in the garden or anything anyway. I think the odds are I will try and finish as many of these half written stories as I can before I burn out again, but we'll see.

Not sure when the stories will be posted, it largely depends on when Mistress feels like reading them. I don't think she's really in the mood right now, we're both utterly fed up of the heat at the moment, so maybe when it cools down a bit. I don't want to post them without Mistress reading them though because she always finds mistakes that I don't spot myself.
 

Wednesday, 8 July 2026

Quite a Day!

So the plumber came, for all of five minutes... and I spent the whole day (pretty much) writing. Having completed the first drafts of parts two and three I concluded that while it ended 'nicely' it still felt incomplete and it still felt like I was leaving it 'hanging'. So I set about writing part four and I've now just finished the first draft of that too.

I feel like it still needs another chapter though, because again it's kinda teasing the reader and hasn't yet paid off. I think one more chapter will be enough, and I'm resisting starting the clean ups on the previous chapters until I've written that one because I don't want to get distracted.

As a matter of fact I've just deleted the first chapter from my pending file on Literotica too, as I want to post it all at once on there when it's finished.

The funny thing is though, I had a quick look at one of my other unfinished stories and it seemed so tame after this one. Which makes me wonder what I should do with those now. It seems a waste to dump them, because a lot of work has gone into them, but on the other hand I feel like I'm moving in the right direction now and I don't really want to take a step back.

And of course now I have the acute embarrassment of Mistress proof reading these other chapters for me at some point... 😟

More Late Night Productivity

It's 9:52AM here in the UK and it's 25 degrees outside. Yay! Thankfully I do not need to go anywhere today as I'm waiting for the plumber to come and fix our leaky sink. Actually I'm here alone because Mistress has gone to work in the office this morning, so I could do literally anything! But I'll probably just do some more writing, maybe tidy the house a bit before the plumber comes and try and get my poorly cat to come out from behind the sofa.

Last night it was hot, but knowing it was only going to get hotter the rest of this week Mistress and I plonked the fan by the bed and I licked her delicious pussy until she came. As always she tasted amazing and I really loved feeling her cum beneath my tongue (that never gets old), but to be honest even with the fan on us, it was very hot... so I was kinda hoping she would leave me locked up.

And I got my wish, which means that I have been left 'locked' intentionally four times so far this chastity year (starting April 1st). Also I've had 2 proper orgasms and 3 ruins, over 99 days. So that's some kind of release roughly every 20 days. In contrast Mistress has had 32 orgasms over 99 days so that's roughly an orgasm every 3 days. 

Something went wrong with Mistress's orgasm count somewhere I noticed. It was over 1700, but I've corrected it now and it now stands at 1673 (roughly 1 every three days over fifteen years!), starkly different to my 'proper' orgasm count which stands at 179 (roughly 1 every 32 days!). Which means the ratio of Mistress's orgasms to mine over the last fifteen years is about 9.3:1, edging closer to that initial target of 10:1 I hoped for way back when we started. We'll get there I'm sure, the current ratio is about 14:1 (based on last year's figures) but we still have to undo those early years when Mistress was way more generous with my orgasms. 🤣

I was up until 2AM last night, knowing I didn't have to get up early today... and it was productive. I've 'completed' probably half of part three of 'How to Break Your Man' (I decided to just keep going and finesse part two later). I'm pretty pleased with how it's turning out, I just hope Literotica publish part one soon because I would like to get some feedback.

There's one part I am really pleased with in part two of this new story, because it really illustrates what I was trying to get across to Mistress about how being 'mean' is HOT. I won't post it yet because I don't want to ruin the story, I hope it will be fairly apparent which part I'm talking about when I post it.

Part three is a weird one, because Amy comes home and it feels 'different'. Part of me thinks I should stop at the end of part two, but I'm trying to get out of that mindset and I feel like I want this story to have at least some resolution to it, rather than everything just hanging in the air like so many others I've written.

Hopefully all three parts will be posted by Sunday.

Back to work tomorrow... 
 

MISTRESS R's TOTAL ORGASMS SINCE 1st APRIL 2011 (1673)
CHASTITY YEAR #16 (32 ORGASMS 1642-1673)
APR 2026 -8, 12, 14, 22, 25, 26, 28. 30 (8)
MAY 2026 - 3, 7, 11, 13, 17, 19, 22, 24, 25, 27, 31 (11)
JUN 2026 - 3, 4, 8, 10, 14, 17, 19, 21, 28, 30 (10)
JUL 2026 - 4, 5, 7,

 
ROBERT ANTHONY's TOTAL FULL ORGASMS SINCE APRIL 1ST 2011 (178-179)
CHASTITY YEAR #16 (2 ORGASMS 178-179)
APR 2026 - 19 (1) (Handjob in Hotel, POT, no cum eating)
APR 2026 – 30 (1) (Cum after ruin, cum fed to me from Mistress’s fingers)
 
ROBERT ANTHONY's TOTAL RUINED ORGASMS SINCE APRIL 1ST 2011 (98)
CHASTITY YEAR #16 (3 RUINED ORGASM 96-98)
APR 2026 - 30 (1)
JUN 2026 - 14, 28 (2)
 
ROBERT ANTHONY TIMES INTENTIONALLY LEFT 'LOCKED'
CHASTITY YEAR #16 (4)
APR 2026 - 28 (1)
MAY 2026 - 19 (1)
JUN 2026 - 4 (1)
JUL 2026 - 7 (1)
 

Tuesday, 7 July 2026

More Stories on the Way!

Believe it or not, I've already written the bulk of the second part of the story I finished yesterday. I wasn't even planning to write one, so I'm as surprised as you are... but I think I need to do this, I need to write more chapters because if I don't then everything gets left unfinished and often nothing ACTUALLY happens... sometimes that's okay, but a lot of the time, it's just 'suggestion'. I really need to move past that and write the Goddamn filth already! 

Well I think I may have actually done that this time, because part two is definitely 'worse' (or 'better' depending on your point of view) than part one... and I have reason to believe that part three might be even worse than part two. Because yes, I am going to write part three of this story... maybe later tonight! 

I have been off work today because I had to take one of our cats to the vet, so really this provided a nice distraction from worrying about her all day, and since it's hotter than hell outside it's not like I was going to do anything very useful with my time.

Admittedly I haven't read part two back yet, I've just spent the last seven hours spewing it out onto the page, all eighteen of them (so it's even longer than part one), but I'm hopeful it won't need too much fettling.

Annoyingly though, I had to change a couple of details in the first part (easily done here of course) but it means it will be put to the back of the queue as far as Literotica are concerned. All it was really was that Amy says she was going to be be at the hotel for two nights and three days, but this turned into four nights and five days as the story 'expanded'.

I've actually included a bit of a comic interlude in this one, which I hope works, I think it gives a bit of relief in what might otherwise be a bit of a 'tense' story. If not, I'm sure someone will tell me. 🤣

Monday, 6 July 2026

The Awkwardness of Proofreading

Well, as you can see, last night I posted my story 'How to Break Your Man'. Which means that I endured the awkward discomfort of sitting next to Mistress while she kindly proof-read the story for me. Always a fun time. 🤣

As ever she gave very little away as far as what she thought of it all, and I didn't ask, because I'm not sure I even want to know... but she said it was 'good' and 'well done'. 

Of course, deep down I am dying to know what she REALLY thought of it, but I guess I should just be happy she wasn't appalled by it and leave it at that. 

She did add that it might cause some consternation in the comments section once it gets posted to Literotica, and there I think she's probably right. I mean I've posted it in the 'Fetish' section, so hopefully that will shield it from the worst of the 'Loving Wives' nutjobs, but I can still imagine there will be one or two nasty ones.

I said yesterday that the story was finished, but I did go back and add in a couple of short extra pieces today. Firstly I felt like there needed to be a brief description of the main character (Amy), I tend to avoid giving huge, detailed descriptions of my characters because I don't really think it's necessary and to be honest I'd rather the reader conjure up an image in their own mind.

The other thing I added was at the end, where Amy asks if Rick has 'more videos like that'. I really wanted to get across how intense and 'addictive' the video was/is (if you followed the link I posted then perhaps you get where I'm coming from?), but in the end I decided to leave the story as it was. I do touch on it throughout but it's perhaps not quite as obvious as I really wanted it to be.

But that's okay. 

Perhaps I will write a follow up where she watches the other videos Rick sends her...?
😀