Believe it or not, I've already written the bulk of the second part of the story I finished yesterday. I wasn't even planning to write one, so I'm as surprised as you are... but I think I need to do this, I need to write more chapters because if I don't then everything gets left unfinished and often nothing ACTUALLY happens... sometimes that's okay, but a lot of the time, it's just 'suggestion'. I really need to move past that and write the Goddamn filth already!
Well I think I may have actually done that this time, because part two is definitely 'worse' (or 'better' depending on your point of view) than part one... and I have reason to believe that part three might be even worse than part two. Because yes, I am going to write part three of this story... maybe later tonight!
I have been off work today because I had to take one of our cats to the vet, so really this provided a nice distraction from worrying about her all day, and since it's hotter than hell outside it's not like I was going to do anything very useful with my time.
Admittedly I haven't read part two back yet, I've just spent the last seven hours spewing it out onto the page, all eighteen of them (so it's even longer than part one), but I'm hopeful it won't need too much fettling.
Annoyingly though, I had to change a couple of details in the first part (easily done here of course) but it means it will be put to the back of the queue as far as Literotica are concerned. All it was really was that Amy says she was going to be be at the hotel for two nights and three days, but this turned into four nights and five days as the story 'expanded'.
I've actually included a bit of a comic interlude in this one, which I hope works, I think it gives a bit of relief in what might otherwise be a bit of a 'tense' story. If not, I'm sure someone will tell me. 🤣
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