Last night I decided to go to bed very early as I had been yawning all evening after two dismal nights this week already and really needed to get some proper sleep. But of course, by the time I had brushed my teeth and got into bed I wasn't really feeling that tired, so I decided to read a couple of stories on Literotica to help me relax.
I headed to the 'Loving Wives' section and clicked on a story called 'I Saw Your Browsing History'. I think the reason I clicked on that one particularly is that it struck a chord with me since one of my 'in progress' stories is based on a similar (but crucially not the same, pretext). I mean on the face of it, that whole 'Browsing History' thing could be construed as a bit of a lazy set-up, but the reality is that it's probably the most likely way a person would discover something they didn't know about their partner's proclivities. And I really don't think it matters if the story is good... and this story was excellent.
I don't want to say too much because I don't want to spoil it for you, but the story is quite different to most cuckold stories... I don't even know if I would truly call it that, it seems to fall much more into the 'wife-watching' category to me, I think there needs to be some other element that isn't actually present to make it a true 'cuckold' story (usually Femdom or at least some stronger element of humiliation). In any case, the basic idea is that the 'husband' in the story has fantasies about seeing his wife with another man, but their sex life is way too vanilla to even risk bringing it up (in fact calling it vanilla is probably overstating it...).
So inevitably she somehow ends up looking at his browsing history and she decides to play a trick on him for his 40th birthday. She arranges to meet him at a hotel for a weekend together (he's convinced she's planning a surprise party which he really doesn't want), but plans to go to the bar alone and try and engage some random chap in conversation thinking it will give him a thrill seeing her talking to someone else and.... well, in her mind he will step in and steal her away. But you can probably already guess that it doesn't quite go to plan...
Sure, perhaps it doesn't sound that amazing from my brief precis, but the story is very well written and satisfyingly long (I think it must be about 8000 words or so). It also moves at a very nice pace, not too slow, not too rushed and the author does a good job of describing the wife's transformation from 'prude' to.... well 'hotwife' I guess. But crucially the author pushes it just far enough, with the wife taking some inspiration from the stories she's read on Literotica, without turning her into a total slut in one evening (which would have ruined it honestly).
Anyway, I thought it was really good and definitely worth adding to my 'Stories by Other Authors' page (even if some of you might find it a little on the tame side). It wasn't until I came to make the banner for it that I noticed the story was only published yesterday and is actually titled 'I Saw Your Browsing History - Chapter One'. On one hand I'm pleased there's going to be more of the story because I really enjoyed it, but I really hope the author keeps the tempo in check and doesn't spoil it by turning the wife into a black-cock-ganbang-whore by the end of chapter two.
It's always nice to find a good Literotica author, but as usual when I checked their story page they had 38 stories, but a whole load of them were in the 'crossdressers / transexuals' or 'gay male' categories (which aren't my thing, personally). There were a couple more in the 'Loving Wives' category but I haven't read them yet, so I hope those live up to this one. In the meantime I strongly suggest giving this a go as it really is very well executed.
After I finished the second story (which really isn't worth talking about) I put the light out and went to sleep for a short period, but then I woke up when Mistress came to bed. She quickly fell asleep but I felt very awake now (of course) and spent the next hour looking at the time projected on the ceiling and thinking about the usual stuff I think about when I'm awake in the middle of the night.
Around 1AM I actually considered getting up and going downstairs, but I decided against it. I also briefly considered waking Mistress up so that I could ask permission to touch my aching cock (haha - no of course I didn't!), which this time wasn't the result of me working on stories in my head, but actually me trying to get my own head around what I would like our new chastity contract to say so that I can explain it to Mistress when the time comes (...and yeah okay, perhaps the story mentioned above a little bit too).
Eventually I did go to sleep and when I woke up this morning I was still hard (surely I wasn't hard all night!). Mistress doesn't work on Friday's so I was prepared to get up quietly and not disturb her lie-in, but she was awake and when I moved to give her a morning cuddle her hand went straight to my cock. Oh, good morning!
Mistress teased my cock beautifully for about five minutes, using her fingers and nails to make me even harder than I started out. I must admit I really love this kind of morning teasing, it's a wonderful way to start the day and I was reluctant to get up at all, but Mistress soon told me that was all I was getting for now (though she did touch me two or three more times after that, so it pays not to rush off).
I've now got two of my own stories that are almost ready for publication, so hopefully both of these will be completed this weekend and I can move on to the next one. 'Leaving it to Fate' is scoring very well, if not as well as 'Discovering Denial', well I didn't really think it would to be honest. But at the moment it's still about a 4.58 / 5 so it's still rated 'HOT' and I have three nice comments on it too.
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