Saturday, 16 November 2024
Gareth's Obsession (Written November 2024)
New Story is Finished!
Tuesday, 12 November 2024
My Story is Getting Closer...
I've reached that difficult stage of writing a long story where it's nearly finished and I start second guessing everything that I've done. I'm even wondering if there's enough actual 'sex' in the story... originally there was supposed to be another scene which was included but I left it out as it interrupted the flow of the main story. I don't know if that was a good idea or not... but on the other hand it feels like the final scene has more impact because of the long slow build.
I also find it quite hard to choose names for my characters sometimes, especially if I start writing with names that I then decide to change. I feel like in fiction, unlike in real life, characters need names that somewhat reflect their status in the story. So for example a 'submissive' male could be called Peter or James, but not Brad or Mike.
Similarly an unattainable 'Goddess' type really can't be called Peggy or Betty, it's just not going to work. Or course you can take this too far, I've seen stories on Literotica where the 'submissive' male is called Cedric or something equally daft that means you can't even read it with any sense of investment. So it's a delicate balance, and one that I hope I have got right. But at the end of the day, there comes a point where you have to go with what you've done and for most people who read it as long as it's not obviously jarring they will just take it at face value.
I've printed my story for the final time and I just need to go through it again with a fine tooth comb (and perhaps decided whether or not to write in the scene I left out) and then it will be time to post it up and start writing the next one.
Sunday, 10 November 2024
Progress on My Latest Story...
I know I said it was coming, I know I said it was close... but it's not quite ready yet. For some reason the last ten days I just haven't had the time to knuckle down and get it finished, but it should definitely be finished and posted by the end of the week. In the meantime I have added four more stories to my 'Stories by Other Authors' page, so if you like you could check those out while you wait.
Sunday, 27 October 2024
Quick Update and A Hot Sunday Afternoon...
First of all I just want to give you a quick update on my new story. I've finished the first draft, and re-read it all and now I've printed it out (on 53 sheets of A4 paper!) to start fine tuning it. I didn't get time to look at it yesterday and I am very much aware that I need to keep the momentum going otherwise there is a serious risk of disinterest setting in.
Also, I am very self-critical about creating things and if I dwell on it too much I know I will start picking it to pieces and want to change things and then before you know it I will convince myself it's absolute garbage - which I know it isn't, and I don't want that to happen. I think it's probably better to keep the rewriting to a minimum and to post it and move on.
I re-read what I think is my 'best' story yesterday ('Girls Talk'), this is the one that has the most requests for more chapters and, like many of my stories, it deserves at least one more. I do have a tendency to write 'first chapters' rather than stories that are complete in themselves, which is a bit annoying honestly, as even I can see that most stories I write feel incomplete.
But I did notice a couple of small details that bugged me in that story, as I had duplicated them in my new story - I mean I seriously doubt anyone else would have noticed, but I still want to change them. Please don't laugh but one of them is that I gave a character in my new story the same car as one in that story... I mean who the fuck would worry about shit like that but me? FFS. 🤣
As my interest in writing has come back, so has my interest in reading stories by other authors, and I am still working on adding stories to my 'Stories by Other Authors' page. I want to do it nicely though and give each one a banner to click on rather than just a list of links. Currently you can access this page from the link at the bottom of the 'Stories' page (under the links to my stories), but when it is a bit more substantial in content I will put a link somewhere more convenient.
Last night I read a great story, which will definitely be getting a link, called 'Her Enthusiasm Made Me A Cuckold'. I just picked a story at random from the 'Loving Wives' section of Literotica and got lucky. The story starts out as a kind of 'wife watching' story and escalates from there. It was only posted a couple of days ago and apparently 'part two' is in the works. I thought it was really good and my cock was rock hard by the end of it (can't give a higher recommendation than that!).
Speaking of which, as I type this, Mistress and I have just got out of bed after a lovely bit of afternoon playtime. Mistress had a lovely orgasm on my tongue, and it was super easy to make her cum today. I mean I would have loved it to go an a bit longer honestly, she tasted so amazing I just wanted to lick her pussy all afternoon but that's just me all over. Always want to be putting stuff in my mouth. 🤣
The last couple of times I've used the Oxballs Cocksling and it's felt great. I don't know what happens with these things, but I haven't used it for ages because the last time I used it (in a Femdom Session, so not recently) it was very uncomfortable and honestly it felt like it was hindering rather than helping. Which I found kind of strange because over the years it's been very good and very reliable.
So I decided to try it again and it felt great, really easy to get on, comfortable and very effective at keeping my balls tight and my cock hard. Mistress teased, stroked and sucked me beautifully before making my day by having me worship her gorgeous ass. I wanted her ass so bad, and today I was definitely going to ask for it, but in the end she decided she wanted me to do it - which is obviously so much hotter.
Mistress sucked and stroked my cock as I worshipped her delicious asshole and I gotta tell ya my cock felt huge and rock hard throughout. After the heavenly ass-worship Mistress continued stroking me and since I hadn't had to ask to worship her ass I decided to chance my arm and ask her to remove her bra so I could see her gorgeous breasts. The strap on the side nearest me had fallen down her shoulder anyway, so I mean...
Mistress looked at me and thought for a second, said 'Not today' and replaced her bra strap.
I mean, was I disappointed - yes, obviously. But considering I just got to worship her divine ass, I couldn't be that upset about it... and secretly I kind of like when she tells me no anyway. That's kinda what got me in this whole mess isn't it - hahaha.
Misress stroked me to the edge and then stopped and we lay in each others arms feeling very close and happy. But my cock just wasn't getting the message and it continued to throb, until I asked Mistress to please touch it some more.
This is where the Oxballs really comes into its own, being able to be teased so lightly but still keeping me rock hard. It felt absolutely incredible and I could have laid there all day with my cock being gently stroked and scratched. But at the same time it also felt great when Mistress slapped my tight balls and cock... she really is amazing.
Tuesday, 22 October 2024
First New Story in a Long Time...
I am excited to tell you that I am finally writing again and will soon be posting a brand new story which includes elements of chastity, cuckolding, cbt, Femdom, etc... all the stuff you would expect from one of my stories. Only it's a little different this one... and it's also very long. I'm still finishing up the first draft and still wondering whether to add in some extra scenes, but it's already 30 pages of A4 and it's only going to get longer.
I'm wondering whether to post it in several chapters on Literotica or not. The good thing about doing that is that gives you a few goes at catching people's attention, but equally I have quite a lot of followers who will find it anyway. I don't know... I'll see how I feel when I finish it.
And then of course there's the question of where to put it, since Literotica still don't have categories that my stories fit into easily. So there's either 'Loving Wives' (where it will get flamed and ripped to pieces but lots of views) or Fetish where it won't get as many views but the audience will be less hostile.
Decisions...
Anyway, it shouldn't be too long... but don't be surprised if it doesn't appear until next week cos there's still a lot of work to do.
Friday, 4 October 2024
A Very Nice Surprise!
Perhaps I was a little hasty posting about yesterday's fun...
After a good night's sleep, Mistress and I headed to the bedroom a couple of hours ago and happily Mistress had a nice orgasm with my tongue on her clit and my finger teasing her ass. I just love making her cum like that, and I think her pussy tastes gorgeous anyway, but when she cums it suddenly tastes even better, which is why I never want to stop! :)
Afterwards I slipped my cock ring on and Mistress soon had me rock hard with her fingers. There are pros and cons with the cock ring, but one big pro is that it does mean Mistress can tease me with gentle, frustrating touches that probably wouldn't be enough for me to stay hard otherwise. And I really love it when she does that.
Anyway, once Mistress tired of teasing me with her fingers she stopped kissing me and took my cock in her mouth, while I slid my hand down to touch her ass. It wasn't long however before Mistress got up on her knees... at first I thought she was just uncomfortable and was manoeuvring herself into a more comfortable position, but then she stood up and swung her foot over me, placing it on the bed so that she was right over me.
I reached up and parted her cheeks, exposing her gorgeous ass and then Mistress made me beg to worship her asshole. She sank down, stroking my straining cock as my tongue eagerly lapped at her. Then I felt her bend forward and take my cock into her mouth, which again feels fucking amazing.
She did this twice, making me beg for her ass each time... then the third time, I knew I was getting close, but I still wanted to worship her ass some more, if only for a few seconds before I had to stop. At first I didn't think Mistress heard me as she continued stroking, but then when I rather panickily warned her again she told me she was going to let me cum.
I returned my attention to her ass as I felt my cock start to spasm. I love coming like that and it was very, very intense. Mistress pulled her ass away and continued milking the cum out of my throbbing cock and then when I couldn't take any more she brought her hand to my mouth and had me lick it clean.
It seemed like there was an awful lot of cum, considering it's only been about three weeks, but I'm not complaining - I love it when Mistress makes me eat my load.
Morning Hotel Teasing
Mistress and I enjoyed our wedding anniversary this week, and this year we decided to go away for a night to celebrate. To be honest we don't tend to go away very often, neither of us tend to sleep well away from home and this wasn't much different despite a good few drinks the night before!
Mistress was already awake when I woke up at 6 and by the time I was giving up the idea of going back to sleep (about 7AM) she was already out of bed and half dressed.
Pondering whether I could manage a swim before breakfast, I sat up in bed and then Mistress appeared in her underwear looking sexy and delicious. I thought she was just coming over to my side of the huge bed to kiss me, but instead she got on the bed and knelt in front of me.
While I would have loved to rip Mistress's panties off and eat her to orgasm, I knew this wasn't on the cards (not least because I knew she was tired and also because I had forgotten to bring my razor so I was quite stubbly already)... but what happened next was quite unexpected.
Mistress sat back down on the bed and offered me her foot to kiss. Then she pulled back the covers to expose my cock and started using her feet to tease it. She continued until my cock was hard (this would have been amazing if we had had some lube with us) and then offered her foot to my mouth again. I could already taste the scent of my cock on her pretty feet which made my cock throb even harder.
Then she dropped her leg and sat upright, reaching forward and teasing my cock with her fingertips and long nails. Then she curled her fingers around it and started to stroke. It felt amazing, and the only thing that would have made it better was if she had been completely naked.
Then she licked the fingers on her left hand and started to tease the head of my cock with them as she continued to stroke. This is a neat little trick that Mistress has picked up in the last year or so, which I really love.
As she stroked harder and faster I convinced myself she was going to let me cum. After all, we were on holiday, it was our anniversary.... she had to let me cum, right?
Even so, when I felt the edge approaching I warned Mistress and she immediately let go, leaving my poor denied cock positively aching for release.
Gah! I was so sure she was going to let me cum, or at least ruin it.
But no. No cumming for me.
But as she sometimes likes to remind me, I wanted (and explicitly asked her) to be 'mean' about keeping me denied and frustrated so I only have myself to blame. This is 100% true, and I wouldn't change it for the world, or course. But even so... I would love to have felt myself explode, or even leak a nice load of cum for her to feed me. :)
After my swim I cuddled her from behind and told her I was so convinced she would let me cum. She said she 'thought about it', but then decided 'no'. Which I loved to hear, honestly. That it was a conscious decision on her part just makes my memory of that morning even hotter.
Mistress then said, I don't think we've ever done it like that before - which is true, I can't ever remember her sitting between my legs like that before and stroking my cock. It would be a great position for her to wrap her left hand around my balls too, and tug and squeeze then while she stroked my cock.
I hope that happens soon!