I'm still adding links to stories by other authors to the blog as I find them, most recently the incredibly lengthy 'She Deserves It' by Cactusaur. This is a good story, but I honestly much preferred the first part to the second. As is often the way with these stories, the author feels the need to ramp things up and up and it gets a bit much by the end.
They also have an odd habit of jumping from one scene to another without explanation, which to me reads like they wrote all the scenes and couldn't be bothered to spend the time connecting them properly. Maybe that won't bother you as much as it did me though... I just feel like this is a very good story that could have been a great story. Still worth a read, but it is extremely long!
On the other hand 'David and Sarah' is much more straightforward (and a lot shorter), again I thought this was pretty good and it kinda reminded me of the 'Feeling Cucky' story that I reposted from an old copy of Forum magazine a very long time ago; 2011 in fact!
I was hoping 'Cactusaur' might have written some other Femdom / Chastity / Cuckolding stories, but sadly not. 'Lockedsissysubmissive' does have some other similar stories, but I think this is the best one.
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