Well, unlike 'Devoted to Mistress's Perfect Feet', which still doesn't have a single comment of any description, but continues to rack up great scores (it's now clearly my highest scoring story ever with a 4.7/5.0!), 'A Wife, Her Boss and Her Cuckold' just keeps picking them up. Which I guess isn't exactly a surprise given the divisive nature of the subject matter.
And honestly the latest two are quite something... shall we start with the positive or the negative? I think we start with the positive.
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I love love love this story. It is definitely one of my favorites on Literotica. The main reason is that it is almost exactly what I wish would happen with me and my wife. I totally truly want her to cuckold me. I totally truly want to suck her lover's cock for her and have him fuck me too.
There are so many great lines from your story but one that sums it up for me is:
"what I really wanted was to watch Frank eat my pussy while Jordan fucked him from behind, but I knew that would take a lot of time and persuasion. I had already shared my thoughts with Jordan and he was on board."
Please continue. Even though this story is quite long, you definitely need to continue and tell us when Frank sucks Jordan's cock and when Jordan fucks Frank's sissy man-pussy. I am so looking forward to reading about that happening.
Hmm, okay. Obviously it's nice to get positive comments like this, but unfortunately I feel like C D Cindy will be disappointed. Because what he/she is asking for is exactly the kind of thing I struggle to actually write. You may have noticed that my stories are often sprinkled with these kind of extreme moments, usually in the form of 'fantasies' within the fantasy.
For instance, in my story 'Dirty Dreams' Mistress Karen tells her husband about her dream where she sucks off two guys while she's riding his face and then feeds him all the cum. See what I mean, there's always a certain 'distance' to it. It's like my way to cope with writing stuff that if feel slightly uncomfortable writing even though I like writing it... if that makes sense.
The other thing that I tend to do is write more extreme parts as if the 'wife/Mistress' is talking to the husband/slave and saying 'I'm going to make you do XYZ....', I've done that loads of times, which is why most of my stories end up reading like the first part of an unwritten series.
So unfortunately while this story is screaming out to be continued, it's unlikely that it will be, unless I can get past that 'blockage' in my own head.
Okay, let's look at the other comment...
by Anonymous
Given the circumstance I am in for this kind of fetish. But given the absolute degradation and humiliation he was forced to endure. She would have woken up to divorce papers. He would have woken up somewhere around the time I slut his throat from ear to ear thinking you were going to stay in my home in my bed. Pfft. Headlines read psycho chatting wife murders boss in torrid affair husband shocked by wife's sudden personality shift.
Hinestly I have seen this in real life. And if a man isnt actually down for it he doesn't sit for it.forcing him only got two gentlemen arrested for beating a man who thought he was safe to death. Consider the real psychological ramifications to something like this. Also even though it's her fetish does not mean we need to be indulging in this cheating behavior like its okay. If they had discussed it and went over the reality that it could be happening.cool. coming home with a load your going to feed me after having just cheated on me? Without my knowledge? Personally id fuck Jordan half to death then make him watch a I burned his house down. I would go to jail a hero....if he wasnt dead he would live the rest of his life a hideous scared freak a living reminder that all men not just alpha men have a feral animal inside of them. And being cocky doesn't make you safe it makes you stupid.
The first thing I want to say about this is that it makes me laugh how (presumably) his phone has auto corrected slit to slut (as in 'I slut his throat'), hahahaha. What does that tell you?
But seriously, it worries me somewhat that people like this clearly don't understand that what's posted on Literotica is 'fiction', you know... 'made up stories' that aren't real. No one actually did anything to anyone, it was all just a fantasy for like minded adults to enjoy. I bet if this person had an account and you could see what kind of stories they 'save' it would be all those 'Burn the Bitch' stories where people vent their spleen about their bitter, angry divorces by writing fantasies about how they would humiliate (and often kill!) their evil, cheating wives.
And that's something I don't understand about Literotica, that they allow those stories at all. Why? Considering they have some red lines about BDSM (or at least they wouldn't publish my story, 'The Vice' even though nothing 'bad' actually happens in it, again it's presented as a mixture of 'fantasy' and reality, as I explained earlier) it seems strange to me that they are quite happy to publish stories where people are literally burned to death for their 'sins'.
But then again, that's an anomaly of modern fiction isn't it? We're quite happy to see books on bookstore shelves where people are tortured and killed for fun, but God forbid anybody wants to have 'weird' sex! What a ridiculous society we are.
Anyway, I've nearly finished tweaking 'Dirty Dreams Ch2' (seven years after 'Ch1', see CD Cindy, there's always hope, haha) and the 'Office Femdom Foot Worship Story' (now called 'A New Recruit Impresses') is with Literotica now and waiting to be published.
That one will be published here later today also. Hope you all enjoy it...
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