Literotica Feedback for Two New Stories...

Over the weekend I posted two stories to Literotica, the first was 'Submitting to Mika' which I posted here last week and the other one was a shorter one called 'Anna's Cuckold' which I will be posting her in a couple of days or so (if you can't wait you can always visit my Literotica page - link at the bottom of the page). Both have already gathered a few comments and as always they are something of a mixed bag!


Initial comments for 'Submitting to Mika':

Anonymous said: Sad life for sad fucks!

MrWideHorizons said: Glad to see your awesome work again!

Anonymous said: Please update! (I presume he means, please continue...)


Initial comments for 'Anna's Cuckold':

Anonymous said: Wow! Sick, stupid and pathetic. One the cucks will enjoy and read over and over. Real men wash their hands after touching this one and are thankful they don’t have a slut wife or are so weak and moronic to even think like a cuck. Just another slut and cuck tale

Sissyjackie2008 said: I remember when my wife cut me off from any more sex only allowing me to give her oral and jerking off onto the toe cleavage in her heels. Of course, I had to clean up my mess with my tongue. To humiliate me even more, she allowed it only when we were wearing matching heels, lipstick and nail polish

Anonymous said: So hot, I hope the story continues. Lots of promise for foot worship fun, sucking wife’s toes as her bull fucks her better than he ever could. Cumming for her bare feet and then the humiliation of serving and sucking the bull. I love it

Suckerman said: Wow! That was one of the best descriptions of a cuckold's mind I have heard. It brought everything together in a way that encompassed the husband and wife's desires quite clearly. The almost ultimate humiliation and out of this world turn on for him, of losing the right to enter his wife's cunt made my little cock stiffen. Even the last bit where he (SPOILER) was a marvellous indication that this author knows and understands a cuckolds mind. I say almost ultimate humiliation (same as turn on for a real cuck) because the ultimate is when the wife tells her husband she is pregnant and its been fathered by the lover (I think a much better word than bull). I know it happened to me and although shocked as several people knew I had been gelded(vasectomy), I came in my panties as she told me.

There was also one other comment but it won't make sense unless you've read the story so I will leave it at that. I did however receive another feedback via email:

Anonymous said: I love this story! I hope you continue this story and turn it into a series. It was so hot. The potential foot fetish and foot cucking possibilities had me so turned on. As well as submitting and servicing the bull as he fucks the cuck's wife better than he ever could. Cuck sucks wife's toes while it happens? So many hot ideas here. Thanks for writing!


Overall then, pretty positive. I posted this in the Fetish category, so it should avoid the worst of the 'Loving Wives' haters... they are both scoring a little low at the moment, but I think that's par for the course with cuckold stories, there are people that go out of their way to mark those kind of stories down. In time I'm sure it will creep up to about 4.1-4.3's which is where I'd expect it to be really, judging by my other stories.